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Competing Blind

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Take a stimuli
toy and play
weave in joy.

Present in contest
with others
that one may conceive
judgments of, of one’s own.

Await, in excitement;
await, with known friends praising;
await, until finally the result?
Void.

Nothing said
nothing known
bar that the three chosen
are the better.

What then?
With collision
conflict and flaw.
Improvement must always be sought.

Nothing can be gained from void.
Such silence.
So draw one’s own conclusions.
A simple step
to take from void response
to void worth of subject presented.

With contest
judgment is made
it is an intrinsic aspect.
So there must have been thought.
Reason in regard.

Who am I to say
since none of the winners
would have been of my choosing.

Perhaps what should truly be taken
is to not try again
not in that way.
Find another?
This is somewhat less general than a spot of prattling I did in a journal post once.
A bit of vent-art I guess. Really hope I'm not offloading too much on you all, I tend to imagine that there's a strong correlation between how fun something is to write and how fun it is to read (so long as the reader knows what the writer is talking about, heh ^^;). Usually once a poem's written and not intended for some other purpose in particular, I tend to upload it by default.
The next time I upload, it will not be like the two of today, I guarantee that.

The end's meant to relate to how things go can depend on where you're entering. So yeah, one attempt can go ill, but another elsewhere a lot better, regardless of the actual results or any end rankings.
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